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Final Temptation

by ~Riverstar33

I stand at the crossroads
Which way is right?
To my left stands a man
To my right stands a knight

The man offers his hand
And says that he'll guide me
Gives freedom and joy
Loves me as I will be

Knight closes his visor
And lays down the law
No passage through here
Without being sure

Man shows how life is
And not how it should be
Keeps life alive
And will naught deny thee

The way of the knight
Is strewn with his lies
Created from riches
While innocents die

The man's path is love
The knight's filled with hate
So I'm torn between
Decision I make

Love should be felt
Not just so claimed
If knight could be cured
But alas he lies maimed

You may think I'm wrong
In what I have left
Behind me stands pain
Forwards lies death

Forgive me my choice
Though it's mine to choose
I know that I'm right
Though how sure are you?
:iconriverstar33:
Ok a LOT different than anything I've EVER done before. I wrote this in the last 10 minutes straight up. Just came straight out... You can construe that point however you will.
Take this poem however you like as well...I know what it means to me and that's all that matters:D
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:iconglittering-scarlett:
Actually now i've read it again i kinda like it enough to :+fav:....

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:iconriverstar33:
Why thank you!!! :D :dance:

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:iconglittering-scarlett:
:glomp: :hug: :cuddle: :teamwork: :highfive: :love:

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:iconglittering-scarlett:
If it means something to you and you understand it then YAY:w00t:

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:iconklickbang:
Aside from thw other comments. what does this mean? another friend once spoke of dreaming of a man who keeps trying to take her hand and lead her down a different path but she resists. she asked me if she should trust the man in her dreams. Is this a similar idea?

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She argues with her voice
The sound of soulful calls
Now a shadow
Faded on the walls.
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:iconriverstar33:
It can mean different things to different people. For me it was a choice made. I think it is a similar idea except not resisting the other path...

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~without the words I feel I'm falling to pieces, the shades of white are closing in~

Now evil laugh with me :mwahaha:, click my avatar and see my page...I dare you...
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:iconomega-werewolf:
I'm bad with decisions, I'd pick whoever had more :pepsi:

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:icongibah:
I know what it means to me and that's all that matters

Then you've done the wrong thing by putting this in the public view, dear. Now that its on dA ALL that matters is what it means to other people.

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:iconomega-werewolf:
That's too narrow and unfair. Posting your work does not make you slave to judgement. Viewer interpretation does not replace/supercede the author's intentions or inspirations.
Sharing is what it is, sharing.

I post work for me. I don't care who likes it and who doesn't. Liking my work is a bonus, but the gallery is mine, visitors are just that, visitors.

Critique is welcomed, but in the end, all that matters are my decisions.

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F.U.N.
F is for fire that burns down the whole town!
U is for uranium--BOMBS!
N is for no survivors!
Down here in the deep blue sea!
-Plankton
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:icongibah:
Quoth myself: Now that its on dA ALL that matters is what it means to other people.

Its hard to get sarcasm across on a computer screen. I was actually referring to the ever increasing MySpace-ish-ness on dA - largely due to thirteen year olds obsessed with manga and anime.

I should point out that ~Riverstar33 is in fact my girlfriend and is fully aware of what I meant to imply with that statement. Obviously, it did not turn out the way I intended and I'm here to apologise if you were offended by my comment.

I checked out your gallery and liked :D Consider yourself watched. You actually already watched a good friend of mine in ~TheSlitWrists, which is kinda cool.

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