If you’re not looking for something how can you know it’s found?
It’s right in front of you
Showing you all you ever wanted
Needed?
Longed for
Some claim that they can learn everything about you
With that first kiss
That momentary touch of pink flesh
Everything?
Apparently
The biggest lie is stated in the above; it wasn’t your kiss
It was just you
The way you beckoned to me
A Gesture?
Seriously
“It must have been more than a gesture” I hear some say
But at that moment
I saw everything slide into place
Perfect?
Complete
How life was bearable before no one will ever know
I certainly don’t recall
Without you here beside me
Darkness?
Nothingness
I can see the light in your eyes; reflecting mine
It’s all in the eyes
The window to your soul
Open?
Comforting
Finding that which was lost in the first instance
And now it's been found
Never wanting to relinquish
Ever?
Ever
©2007-2009 ~Riverstar33
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An amalgamation of some lyrics I've written for other songs that will never go anywhere and some more to make something...
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It has a great sound to it, and I really like the second voice in it, the question/answer. That gives it a greater oomph, actually putting the two people in the love poem. A really spot on touch.
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